![]() It's not that I didn't like Sam and Sophie. Or, we're told Garrett and Rachel "Have always had a special bond", but how did it start? Why those two? For instance we're told Garrett has always been overprotective, but it would've been nice to see it, through a memory, like Once, when we were kids. The best way to make me believe something about a character is to show me, through a situation or a memory that it's true. I missed little things like:What is their favorite colour? Do they like pets? Are they grouchy in the morning? Are they slobs? Do they have nervous habits? Something that would make them feel unique, that would make identify with them and like them. ![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know why I missed this so much, but I did. I have finally figured out what was missing in this book. ![]()
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